Introduction
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Industry and Revolution in 18th Century England
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What part did the English Midlands play in the 'Industrial Revolution'? |
66% |
Planning and organisation of material:
Well planned and laid out.
Use of sources:
Good range of sources quoted. [change of hand] A few incosistencies in referencing, and one or two non-academic sources.
Analysis:
A good summary in a limited space.
Presentation:
Good.
Overall comments:
Sensible and reason discussion. [change of hand] Lacking a little in contextual analysis.
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To what extents was last eighteenth century English society affected by 'Revolutionary' ideas from America and France? |
67% |
Planning and organisation of material:
Tightly organised and well thought out.
Use of sources:
Perhaps use more printed than electronic sources? [change of hand] You do not always choose the best sources.
Analysis:
Sensible, well argued discussion [change of hand] but could have been more clearly focused on key issues.
Presentation:
Good throughout.
Overall comments:
A very impressive summary, well done! [change of hand] but a little lacking in analysis.
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