Introduction
Level 3, Year 1 (2004/2005)
Level 2, Year 2 (2003/2004)
Level 2, Year 1 (2002/2003)
Level 1, Year 2 (2001/2002)
Level 1, Year 1 (2000/2001)
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History of Birmingham
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Mediaeval Birmingham |
B+ |
Planning and organisation of material:
Generally excellent but you could have brought the archaeological evidence into play earlier. What of Hessum's Ditch etc.?
Use of sources:
Thorough and intelligent with correct use of referencing.
Analysis:
Clearly developed analysis of the conflicting views - it would have been interesting what your own conclusions were.
Presentation:
Excellent.
Overall comments:
A very good essay showing qualities which will serve you well at level 2 provided you work developing a stronger personal voice.
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Report on eighteenth century maps as an historical source |
B+ |
Planning and organisation of material:
An otherwise excellent essay is spoiled by failing to identify Birmingham maps and the key issues surounding them from the start.
Use of sources:
Good range, intelligently used.
Analysis:
You make some very cogent points throughout, both drawn from the secondary sources and using your own personal interpretation.
Presentation:
Exellent.
Overall comments:
A certain 'A' (or even A+) had it not been for the non-specific opening paragraphs.
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